Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Environmental
problems
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are of the greatest importance issues of nations and societies these days. Some people believe that the extinction of species of
animals
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and
plants
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is a very significant problem, while others consider different
problems
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more important. In my opinion,
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species keeping safe is necessary, some other issues
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as climate change should be considered more important than other
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.
To begin
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, animal and plant maintenance is essential in order to many important roles that they play in human life.
Animals
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have the main position in the human food chain by providing dairy and meat.
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, forests and
plants
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are a huge source of food, oxygen, raw materials, and other vital things for humanity. Without forests, humans cannot continue their life, due to the lack of oxygen produced by trees.
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, they play important role in the reduction of carbon and maintaining soil and water safe and clean.
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, trees prevent soil erosion and help the soil to attract water pouring during the rain.
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, other people think that there are other more significant
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including huge changes in weather and atmospheric conditions. Nowadays, fumes and emissions released from cars and factories cause a dangerous phenomenon called the greenhouse effect, which has irreparable consequences on human life.
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,
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in average atmosphere temperature, that affected by
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phenomenon, causes polar ice mountains
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to melt, followed by increasing in sea levels and destroying a lot of cities. Actually, climate change not only can cause human extinction due to making dangerous effects on the environment but
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can extinct
animals
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and
plants
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. In conclusion, whereas maintaining
plants
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and
animals
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is a very essential duty of humans, I think, we should concentrate on our activities against to environment, which would keep safe humans and species, as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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