You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • say how you feel about his performance • give details of your musical activities • explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Sammy,
I attended your concert
last
weekend. It was a gorgeous listening buffet.
The piano track you played was so melody that I feel flying in the sky and merging into the ancient forest. I cannot stop thinking about how nice it was. I like your patient and gentle performance which is the best profile I have seen.
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Nowadays, I am studying piano activities. I will study hard and I want to be a great musician like you. I go to tafe once a time every week. As the course has 36 lessons, I will finish the plan in a year. In class, the teacher will show us how to use fingers and how to follow the musical notation. Sometimes I discuss playing skills with my classmate and talk about who are genius musicians in the world.
I know you are always busy in your life, I still wonder if you can give me some advice on my study course and can revise my finger gesture on piano. If you can help me with my musical activities, I can be more confident and would increase my performance on the course.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Best regards,
Cole ChenLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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