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The food travels thousand of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages ?

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Since the advent of aviation ,
food
 travel has become
the
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 common phenomenon.
However
, it is suggested that local
food
 ought to
be opted
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 in order to
safegaurd
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safeguard
 the environment and
to
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benefit the farmers. Admittedly,
individual
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individuals
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 can enjoy
the
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 variety of
food
items
.
Nonetheless
 , imported
food
 impinges on
biosphere
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 and on the economy of a nation incredibly. On the one hand , importing needed
food
items
 from the other nation is highly beneficial ,
consumer
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consumers
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 can have
variety
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a variety
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 of
food
items
 on their
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dining
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dinning
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 table which can only be possible thanks to the importation of
food
 . To add to it ,
land
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the land
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 of certain countries is not fertile relatively to others which may
further
 yield to the scarcity of necessary
food
. To cite an example , Arabian countries are unable to
fulfill
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 the demand
of
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food
 owing to
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the non
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non fertile
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 soil .
Therefore
 it is inevitable that dependence on
food
 travel has become the need of the hour for many nations.
On the other hand
 , buying
food
 from
the
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other countries is extremely detrimental
for
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environment
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the environment
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 .
Firstly
 , transportation
mode
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modes
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,
range
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ranging
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 from lorries to
aeroplane
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aeroplanes
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 are needed to provide
such
kind
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kinds
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 of
food
items
 to
the
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every corner of the world .
Consequently
 ,
exorbitant
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an exorbitant
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 amount of fossil fuel is consumed , which
further
 leads to the
depletation
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depletion
 of our environment .
Secondly
 ,
consumer
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consumers
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 have to pay
extra
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the extra
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cost
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costs
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, included
into
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 the price since these
food
items
 are taxed by statutory bodies while travelling , in that
case
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 local
food
items
 can be cheaper and healthier. To conclude ,
food
 travelling internationally is beneficial for the consumers though serious repercussions caused by
food
 travel cannot be
ingnored
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ignored
.
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