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Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas . Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

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It has been observed that residential issues,as well as transportation ,problems have been rising at an alarming
rate
 in the urban areas.
Therefore
, to overcome these, large occupations have to shift their infrastructures toward the countryside. The merits of
this
 situation are more than the demerits which will discuss below. To embark, the foremost advantage is it will reduce the unnecessary
traffic
 congestion in cities. To elaborate on
this
, nowadays increasing numbers of people commute to work at different locations in cities from the rural areas at the same time.
However
, if the location of their organizations is changed
then
 there will be fewer
traffic
 jams in peak hours of the day.
As a result
, the
rate
 of road
traffic
 accidents may decrease. Another one is, that poverty will reduce in underdeveloped areas.
This
 means that employment opportunities may arise in rural sites if large industries will shift to that sites. So, individuals do not have to go to larger cities in order to find a job and they can earn money. For an instance, according to the statical report of the Indian government, it is proven that fifty per cent of the poverty issue was eradicated in the Gujarat state by rebuilding the enterprises at village routes which gave opportunities to labours to work full-time.
On the other hand
, the biggest demerit is it may affect farming activities.
This
 is to state that, most of the soil is occupied by the farmlands. , transferring the factories into the farmlands may reduce the
rate
 of farming and
also
 negatively impact the crops as the factories will release the toxic materials into nearby places.
For example
, the cotton mill located at Pali village released poisonous waste on the nearby farms which drastically declined the
rate
 of production of corps. In conclusion, notwithstanding the cons associated with farms can be mitigated by the care of drainage system, the pros
such
 as ameliorating the effect of poverty as well as
traffic
 problems can be logically acceptable.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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