Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the issue of
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that have to make a decision at work has become one of the world's problems. Some
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think that running away from
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and finding better things is the best way, whereas others think that accepting it and being tolerated
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more consistent. In
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problem in the following paragraph.
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of all, the reason that
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run away from bad situations is that they want to find a better job that can increase their income to support their life.
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, Indian
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are moving to Australia to find new jobs because Australia is one of the countries that
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the highest hiring rate per hour.
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, if some
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had
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high education, maybe they could have a wider range of career opportunities.
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, some
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have to resist bad situations because they lack education, so they have fewer choices of career or work.
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of some companies wants to get out of their jobs, but they didn’t graduate from any school, so most companies will decline their application.
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, maybe they are afraid of change, which can lead to the possibility of making a situation worse. In conclusion, both views have their own strong points, but in my perspective, I think that running away from a bad situation has more ways to become a successful person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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