Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

There are many artificial, unhealthy

sugar

included in

the

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processed

food

and

drink

.

This

might lead to numerous health issues and

thus

,

products

with artificial sweeteners are sold

in

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a high cost. I personally agree that sugary

products

should be expensive. To start with,

children

are now being exposed to

products

that are sweet

such

as candy, energy

drink

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, or soda. These

products

are generally affordable and

hence

making it easier for

children

to buy them. Especially if the only options available are

food

with

excessive

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amount

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amounts

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of sweeteners.

In

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that

reasons

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, increasing the price of these brands would likely halt people, especially

children

, from buying them, making it difficult for

children

to have access to artificial, unhealthy

sugar

. With limited to no access to

sugar

, healthier snacks or beverages are the only options available and

children

would likely

to

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consume them more due to the reduction

of

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the number of sweet

products

being sold in stores.

Additionally

, setting high prices

to

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these

products

would indirectly contribute to obesity prevention. 30% of

children

in America are obese mainly because of the high consumption of fabricated

food

and

drink

and with the limitation of selling, the sugary intake of young

children

would be minimized. There are

also

certain benefits generated from

this

act if the government consider

to eliminate

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the spread of

high level

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sugar

products

like preventing heart diseases and boosting dental health.

Although

the distribution of fabricated sugary

products

might add to certain local

stores

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revenue, profits could be gained from selling healthy, yet appealing

food

and

drink

like sushi or milk. To summarize, sugary

products

with expensive

cost

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sparks more benefits than harm as a way to improve

children

's health.