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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. Towhat extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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The unable recycling
waste
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 has been increasing over the years.
People
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 say it is
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government
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 responsibility to enact laws to solve the problem. I completely agree that the
government
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’s role could be an effective tool for reducing
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waste
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. In
this
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government
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 can be a big part of
this
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. Every day, each household creates a large amount of trash from living life.
People
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 always find easy ways to eliminate
waste
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 from their
home
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homes
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 by gathering it in one basket and throw away at once. Due to laziness,
people
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 who tend to throw away their
litters
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 will always continue doing it regardless. If the
government
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 impose
regulation
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regulations
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 related to
waste
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 management, citizens would be scared of the punishments or fines they will get.
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, in Singapore, the authority established the law about gums are not allowed
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 in public.
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,
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 regarding travellers would abide by inevitably.
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, governments could play a huge role
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 shaping
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 to tackle the struggle together.
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 the laws related to trash is the most effective means that will stimulate
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 to obey.
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, Not only does it help
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 the human’s sense of habit to care about the result of separating the trash, but it
also
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 establishes the culture of the society which
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may produce the tourists’ awareness. To illustrate, tourists visiting
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Japan tend to separate
waste
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 into groups due to the law the
government
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 created which is now a unique habit of
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. To conclude,
although
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 there is
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an individual’s
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 responsibility to enable the habit and culture, the
government
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 could take part in and solve the issue by
enact
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 the laws. It is the fastest way to solve the problem.
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