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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. Why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#business #emphasis #products #development
In the advertising world due to some
reasons
, it is normal to point out that their
products
 are newer than others
addition
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 to some
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especial
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 features that they have put in. there are some
pro
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 and cons and I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages at some points.
Firstly
, there is a reason which I assume is
one
 of the most important
one
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 and it relates to the fact that
people
's lifestyle and the things that are appreciated in the eyes of society is changing and it can be regarded
as a result
 of many
stuffs
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such
 as the truth that nowadays
people
 value things that are newer or those that have an especial feature more than before. On the
one
 hand, there are negative results
such
 as it can widen the gap between
people
 as a nation and
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has a negative impact on the society.
On the other hand
, there are some positive results
for example
although
 it is not a beneficial thing to have
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 between
people
 in a country, you can not make the assumption that not
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 is
a
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beneficial,
thus
 the more
people
 become familiar with the newest improvement, the more developed they will become as a nation.
Secondly
,
one
 of the
reasons
 which I believe, we all are familiar with is the speed of science that may be
one
 of the
reasons
of
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 inventing new things or producing
products
 that are new each day so it is logical seeing
people
 who advertise their
products
 as a unique
one
.
This
one
also
 has
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 of positive and negative results but
this
 has much
less
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 negative ones
,
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 because at least these days these kinds of developments are very beneficial. In conclusion, due to many
reasons
 advertising
products
 and emphasis on their new stuff is not a surprising event so we should not be shocked but
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all
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 it has some advantages and disadvantages. In my view, the positive developments outweigh the negatives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • novelty
  • innovation
  • trend-setting
  • competitive market landscape
  • crowded markets
  • differentiating
  • psychological trigger
  • technological advancement
  • consumerism
  • short-lived
  • environmental harm
  • ethical standards
  • quality products
  • efficient solutions
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