You work for an international company. You enjoy this work but now you want to leave the company. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter - Tell the manager why you want to leave the company - Explain what you have learnt from working at the company - Say why you have enjoyed working for the company

Dear Mr Rob, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I will be leaving Citibank in one month and my

last

day here will be the 24th of May 2022.

Although

I have enjoyed working under your guidance and with the team here in Toronto, personal reasons necessitate that I quit my position and focus on improving my situation at home in India. I will be indebted to you for providing me with a great learning environment and your support to me and my team at the branch is unforgettable. I am grateful to you for subjecting me to several inhouse training and I must mention that the course “7-habits of successful people” really shaped my personality. I have enjoyed working for Citibank for the perks we got every year. Our quarterly team-building outing at the golf course has cemented my bond with everyone at the branch. Once again, thank you so much for all the motivation talks and for just being a huge influence in my life. I will look forward to working with you in the future. Yours sincerely, Toni

Submitted by Toni R on Thu Apr 21 2022

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

184 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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