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You recently heard about an international company that you would like to work for. Write a job application letter and say: How did you hear about the company? What skills and qualification do you have? Why do you want to work there?

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Dear
Mr.
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 Rob, I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in working with your company. I heard lots of positive feedback about your organization from my cousin, who works in your Sydney office. I would like to propose myself as a potential candidate for any future vacancy. Currently, I am working with Reliance Communications as a regional sales manager. I have been working here for 8 years and I am a qualified
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post graduate
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 in marketing. I have
in depth
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 knowledge of
telecommunication
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 industry along with
pragmatic
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 business sense. I was
also
 awarded the best performer for the
last
 two consecutive years. I always wanted to associate with your organization because your company gives equal chance to all the employees to prove their mettle.
Moreover
, your company is
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 pioneer in
communication
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 industry, so it will be a great opportunity for me to learn up to date skills. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Roger
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