You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course. say how much cooking you have done since the course. suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer. Write at lease 150 words.

Dear sir/ Maam. I am writing
this
letter to you express my feedback which I recently compleated about the international cookery course in your institutes
last
month. I would say,it was an amazing course and I learned about the basis of French cuisine and come across with enhancing my cookery skills.
In addition
, I would enjoy making Italian dishes which are pasta, and pizza.
Moreover
,
last
month, I had a chance to show up my culinary skills in front of the chef's grill. I would win the silver medal for my live cooking. Because of your college training.
However
, if I would suggest that bringing up new courses
such
as sugar carving, Desserts it will encourage and improve the knowledge of the student not only that may be they can win the World
also
. I hope you will consider my opinion and looked forward to your reply. Yours Faithfully. Thisara Madusanka.
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