In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

First
of
all
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this
is
very
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good topic. Some
people
telling for all students it is
good
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advantage to spend at least a year away from
studys
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studies
study
before university going after high school finished. I
am not agree
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with
this
given statement and my
reasions
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reasons
behind
this
are given below. In India, all
family
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families
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focus
for
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educasion
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education
. My
first
reasion
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reason
reaction
for
this
because
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students take
educasion
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education
very good in all
the
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life
. Getting
good
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job and good
thing
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things
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later in
the
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apply
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life
so
first
must finish full
educasion
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education
. If
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you no
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no
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do
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have degree
then
life
all-time very much difficult and live like poor
people
.
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, I do only till 12 class and so I not find any big job
also
not good my
english
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. If get
degree
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a degree
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maybe my
life
better. My
second
reasion
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reason
is that if taking a break
then
boys play in street or
playing
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too
much
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games.
Also
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some boys have too much free time and
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their mind
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mind
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minds
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get bad and they
taking
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drugs. My
third
reasion
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reason
is some
people
take jobs working
then
they run after money. They get money mind if one year gap no learn in college. I see my
friend
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child Canada
study
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studying
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high school but after not going
university
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to university
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so spoiling all the time and
play
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playing
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mobile phone games. He
also
some times
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sometimes
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taking
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takes
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drugs, full doing bad things and
waste
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wastes
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life
. So,
break taking
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break-taking
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after school
no
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is no
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good. Final, I think that
educasion
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education
is
impotant
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important
and my father says it is going with me till my end. So, all
people
do
educasion
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education
first
and work after
finish
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finishing
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university.
This
is the best option for all secondary students.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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