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what is the difference between tv and newspaper when convey the news

News
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 has been a part of our daily life for many years. People want to know the latest information in order to be informed about the world. In the past, the medium of delivering the
news
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 to the masses has been through a word from people close to us, but as time changed, the method of spreading the
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 has
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 changed. From a bulletin board or flyers to more
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 outlets like
newspapers
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 and
television
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.
However
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, there are differences between
newspapers
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 and
television
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 in terms of delivering the
news
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 to people.
Firstly
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,
newspapers
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 have been the form of giving the
news
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 to its reader since the invention of printing. As the name implies, the
news
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 is given via the use of paper, in it, the biggest
story
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 of that issue would be featured in big bold characters, and the size of the text would indicate the importance of the
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. Those are known as the headlines. They are short groups of text that would explain what the
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 is all about. Each issue of the paper would feature the stories that the audience
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 interested in, but the
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 features are limited (in terms of the length) which might not give the reader a full picture of the
story
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 of the event.
Newspapers
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 would
also
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 be a little behind other forms of
news
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which
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 the readers might not know the latest update to the
story
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 that they are reading.
Secondly
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,
television
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 is one of the big leaps in how the
news
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 has been reported. The
news
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 would be broadcast from either a studio or on-site where the
story
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 is happening with
presenter
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(s) delivering the
news
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 to the viewers and oftentimes the
news
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 would be shown live. The length of the
news
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 would be longer (depending on the allotted time) which could potentially give more
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 information than other forms of
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 with visual representation to help illustrate the detail.
In addition
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, the
news
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 on
television
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 could be accessed much easier than in the newspaper.
As a result
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, the viewers are likely to be informed about the
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 quickly and would be able to understand the
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 in
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much greater detail which might make the audience be more interested in receiving the
news
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 from
this
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 method. All in all,
newspaper
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the newspaper
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 is a physical form of receiving the
news
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 whereas
television
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news
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 is a broadcast that we receive via the
television
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.
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Newspaper
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 would update the
news
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 periodically as each issue is being printed. In each print, the
news
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 would be covered in a way that the reader would understand the
story
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 with a bare minimum of words fitted in a fixed size paper. As for
television
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news
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,
however
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, the
news
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 would be directly informed by a presenter or on-site location where the
news
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 broke out. The detail of each
news
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 would be longer, yet understandable because of the visual and audio elements
such
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 as video clips or audio recordings. These are the differences
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 both mediums when they convey
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news
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 to the audience.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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