You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

#work #home #piece #equipment #job #shop #company

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

to complain about the

headset

that I have received recently as part of an employee onboarding process. As part of my job responsibility, I need to facilitate meetings every day between stakeholders and the technology team.

Therefore

, it is a mandatory requirement that the

headset

should be good enough to perform my duties.

However

, the

headset

which you supplied is defective and bearly audible to participants in my meeting.

Furthermore

, the problem became worst in yesterday's meeting when I was unable to deliver the presentation to the business.

Although

I was well prepared and expecting an approval on our business proposal unfortunately everything went in vain as none of the meeting attendees was able to hear my speech.

Therefore

, I would request with help desk support team to immediately take an action on

this

and replace it with a new

headset

. I really appreciate it if you could send me a Bluetooth

headset

. Because with that I can even take my office laptop to the projector room. I hope you will immediately take an action and shipped the new

headset

. Feel free to reach out to me with any questions. Yours Sincerely, Sasha

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

199 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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