You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
to complain about the
headset
that I have received recently as part of an employee onboarding process. As part of my job responsibility, I need to facilitate meetings every day between stakeholders and the technology team.
Therefore
, it is a mandatory requirement that the
headset
should be good enough to perform my duties.
However
, the
headset
which you supplied is defective and bearly audible to participants in my meeting.
Furthermore
, the problem became worst in yesterday's meeting when I was unable to deliver the presentation to the business.
Although
I was well prepared and expecting an approval on our business proposal unfortunately everything went in vain as none of the meeting attendees was able to hear my speech.
Therefore
, I would request with help desk support team to immediately take an action on
this
and replace it with a new
headset
. I really appreciate it if you could send me a Bluetooth
headset
. Because with that I can even take my office laptop to the projector room. I hope you will immediately take an action and shipped the new
headset
. Feel free to reach out to me with any questions. Yours Sincerely, Sasha
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