You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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to complain about the
headset
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that I have received recently as part of an employee onboarding process. As part of my job responsibility, I need to facilitate meetings every day between stakeholders and the technology team.
Therefore
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, it is a mandatory requirement that the
headset
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should be good enough to perform my duties.
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, the
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which you supplied is defective and bearly audible to participants in my meeting.
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, the problem became worst in yesterday's meeting when I was unable to deliver the presentation to the business.
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I was well prepared and expecting an approval on our business proposal unfortunately everything went in vain as none of the meeting attendees was able to hear my speech.
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, I would request with help desk support team to immediately take an action on
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and replace it with a new
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. I really appreciate it if you could send me a Bluetooth
headset
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. Because with that I can even take my office laptop to the projector room. I hope you will immediately take an action and shipped the new
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. Feel free to reach out to me with any questions. Yours Sincerely, Sasha
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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