Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Various

items

made

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in manual

during

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in

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the past, which was commonly believed that full of physical feelings, but now made by

modern

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machine as the technology development. Some people

argues

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that handcraft products

owns

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higher value than the standard machine products, while others keep

opposite

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the opposite

an opposite

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point. In my view,

such

development will bring more advantages for it is not only drop down the cost but

also

increase the

efficient

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efficiency

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. On the one hand, handcrafts represent mental value and concern emotion which was cherished as

the

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important gift

should

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that should

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be well-stored. As the Chinese traditional saying goes, focus on the meaning behind

of

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apply

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the products

instead

of the price.

Moreover

, when people are shy to express their feelings in words, they

prefer

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make something in manual and send it as a gift which

represent

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represents

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lots of words, and these special kinds of

items

that will not

replaced

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be replaced

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by

mechanism

forever.

On the other hand

, the quantity and quality

has

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have

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been promoted and increased with the

mechanism

fast-development

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of fast-development

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, which

is benefit

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benefits

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our society and

individual's

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individual

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life.

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, making clothes by

hands

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hand

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will cost months and too

much

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many

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resources, which

cause

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causes

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the clothes without

same

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the same

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standard and high price. While, modern

mechanism

factory can

product

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produce

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the clothes once a time with the same quality and huge quantity in a few hours, which can directly and efficient decline the price for each cloth and maintain the customer can enjoy the same service with the same expense. In conclusion, the modern

mechanism

development which

is not benefit

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does not benefit

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society

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society's

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economy but

also

individual's life. It

is not cause

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is not causing

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conflict with the handcraft

items

for some people who

interested

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are interested

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in hand-make can still keep making

items

by themselves.