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Advantages and disadvantages of working a big company and a small comany

Today, the majority of
people
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workplace
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convenient
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 and
well -paid
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 job. There are a lot of companies , corporations and organizations to
work
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people
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.May believe that apply big companies create a
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professional environment for staff and they have the
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high salaries to give to employers.
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, some own
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small and family-run
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businesses
 to improve for financial
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positive aspects of working for companies or
family- run
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businessess
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businesses
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 the negative of the top. In
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people
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 prefer to
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 in a big company and how comforts have to run a
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small
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, there are a lot of opportunities to
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 in big
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companies company
.What I mean by
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work
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high salary by a big corporation and if they perform the task diligently so
people
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 can choose to
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 in a big organization.
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, öne of the pros of working is that there is a friendly atmosphere there. Old workers teach new staff how to run
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 processes and it can help them to digest faster
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life
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. Turning to another side of the argument, working in a small
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 require to be multifunction it is difficult to start from scratch.
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 be less opportunity for promotion, as well as growth and it
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 can be a financial crisis.
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, many emphasize that operating a small enterprise is not easy because there is no strict system and program to run. To sum up, working in a large
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 is very convenient and it helps to öpen opportunity door which brings us improved
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 and professional environment.
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, a family-run
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 does not offer wide opportunities for staff.In my view, a big establishment is suitable to grow for position and career.

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