it is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. this money should be spent on buildings on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Society, without any doubt, is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindsets of

people

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. It is often argued that

people

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must take care and furnish ancient buildings, whilst others think that money should be spent on constructing new buildings.

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it is crucial to construct the latest building, I firmly believe that money should be spent to look after historic buildings.

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with, it is extremely costly to preserve ancient structures but it is essential to preserve them because

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signifys

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signifies

an old era of human civilization. If they

are not preserve

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, they will eventually

vanished

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and an important part of history will be removed. As an illustration, The Statue Of Liberty in New York tell us about the freedom war fought in the USA to free slaves.

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, they should be maintained

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, the future

people

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will be clueless about the past.

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, these structures should

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conserve

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because they attract international tourists.

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this

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help

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financial

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growth of local

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people

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business as well as a country's economy.

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, The King Faisal palace in Al Ulah has become the top tourist destination in the KSA in

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last

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five years.

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, the Saudi government spends millions of dollars to protect it. In conclusion, it

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that

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of investing money

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building new structures as they play a very important role in a country's economy.

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notion.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

239 words

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