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Today,people's life expectancy is much higher than before. Some beleive that older people should continue to work. Do you agree or disagree?

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With the development of medication, the
life
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 span of human beings has increased. It is believed by some
people
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 that
people
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 of more age must continue their
work
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 which I totally agree. As
life
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 progresses,
people
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 learn a
lot
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 of things while doing their activities at their
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.Experience is one of the important assets which comes with time.
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, youngsters working with them learn lots of new ideas which they will not be able to get at their early stage which helps them to think in the right direction.
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, a team leader with long experience will not have theoretical knowledge but
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 vast practical knowledge which comes with time only. Oldage
people
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 can enjoy their personal
life
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 while working because it keeps them active.
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,there will be fewer health issues which usually come to
people
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 if they are not involved in activities.
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, the government can save a
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 of money as there will be fewer retired
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.
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, a
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 of funds from retirement funds can be utilized in other sectors.
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 countries can spend more on industrialization,research and health sectors resulting in more opportunities for youngsters. To summarize,elderly ,
people
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 continuing their
work
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 has a
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 of experience which help youngsters and organization.
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, it helps them to live an independent better
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 and
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 saves a
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 of money from government funds if they
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 continuously.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • aging population
  • cognitive decline
  • workforce
  • mentorship
  • age discrimination
  • financial necessity
  • retirement savings
  • innovation
  • healthcare
  • living standards
  • fulfillment
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