Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some believe that the major environmental issue of our current

life

is the loss of special species of

plants

and

animals

, while others and I argue that the most serious environmental

problems

exist. In my opinion, the mentioned

problems

of the

first

group are rooted in larger ones, which the

second

group say. It is undeniable dead

plants

and

animals

have vital importance in the cycle of

life

. All flora and fauna are connected to each other the same as the loops in a chain, and the extinction of each of them would have a massive impact on others.

For example

, if a kind of bird, feeds on the murders extinct, pollution caused by uneaten murderers in nature may kill a large number of other

animals

.

Hence

, it is crucially important to address environmental

problems

to protect

plants

and

animals'

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life

especially

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the ones that have been put in danger of extinction. Whereas, it is believed that by concentrating on larger

problems

mankind would be able to resolve most environmental issues, which include the survival of

plants

and

animals

. Nowadays, climate change has attracted the most attention, as it can be seen

its

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consequences.

For instance

, by getting warmer

of

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the earth the polar ice

are

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melting and the sea level is rising, so the lands are going under the water and drought is threatening the

life

of human, flora and fauna.

Therefore

, the causes of climate-changing change and global warming should be disappeared. In conclusion,

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I believe that by solving more serious environmental

problems

not only the

plants

and

animals

life

would be rescued, but

also

humans would be protected from some dangerous environmental issues.