Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give you an opinion.

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There has been continuing general discussion about whether or not
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should be forbidden in the touristic regions to save the local tradition. I would argue that
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with beneficial effects should not be banned in the country. On the one hand, there are many harmful effects of
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in the states. One of them is the large
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of people flooding into historical buildings will be able inevitably
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cause erosion.
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, there was a summit funeral as it is called ‘’Mount Nemrut's’’. A
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of statues are scattered around the funerary mound. When ı was in secondary school, ı went there. There was not any regular road to visit the place. Mankind was trying to reach the summit by walking. There had not made any maintenance at the
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attraction. People had dumped their litter everywhere.
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of
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of human beings entering any historical place should be restricted.
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has numerous beneficial impacts for many countries.
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, the
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trade is a valuable source of income for a couple of states. İn addition, touristic facilities make up a large proportion of the national revenue. İncreased demand from tourists can boost the local economies.
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, the contribution of travel and
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to the country’s economic budget for Turkey was 12.7 % three years ago. The
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income in Turkey has dropped sharply in 2020 due to the coronavirus (COVID-19) pandemic. Nowadays, there is a deep recession in Turkey.
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can
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bring investment opportunities from wealthy foreign investors.
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, Spain has plenty of
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attractions. The majority of European visitors mostly spend their holidays in
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country as there is a large quantity of investment. In conclusion, while the
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of people flooding into historical buildings will be able inevitably
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cause erosion, ı would argue that the
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trade is a valuable source of income for a couple of states and
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can
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bring investment opportunities from wealthy foreign investors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influx of tourists
  • dilute local customs
  • commercialization
  • loss of native languages
  • economic benefits
  • revenue source
  • responsible tourism
  • cultural sensitivity
  • regulated tourist limits
  • cultural heritage
  • globalization
  • case study
  • ‘High Value, Low Impact’ tourism
  • controlled tourism
  • middle-ground solution
  • infrastructure development
  • significant revenue source
  • employment generation
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