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Describe a teacher who has influenced you in your education

Well, it’s a good topic to discuss, I consider myself fortunate to have been taught by many nice and fabulous teachers, but if I want to address one of them as the best, who has had a great impact on my
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 and education I should acknowledge my English
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 who I’m glad that I met him around two years ago once I was looking and searching for a good
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, fortunately, I stumbled upon him. In order to let you know how and why he has played a central role in my education and
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, I need to draw your attention to my insight about the word
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. Yes,
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, for many of us these days
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 is considered as a title as itself,
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, from the point of my view, it’s not simply as a title which is being given to any individual who has a specific knowledge to provide it to others, teach and prepare them for something that we call it exam. The word
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 includes abundant precious words and adjectives that should be addressed as the characteristics and personality traits that teachers should have. Having said that my
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, if he didn’t have all of them, had some good ones. Apart from his solid knowledge of English and teaching, he has opened up and expanded a new chapter in my
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 by training me how to think out of the box and not be afraid of stepping out of my comfort zone and walking through obscure fields to find unknown aspects of
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, and, me myself. These are the characteristics that discern him from my other teachers. He sowed them on me and grew them carefully like a farmer that now I’m benefiting from them these days.

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