More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

There are a number of

people

that would like to move to

places

that are far from their

friends

and family members, some

people

believe that it can benefit them while

this

essay will discuss both sides and state that the drawbacks outweigh the benefit. On the one hand, there are two pros. The main advantage is that it can make

people

become more independent. When they have to leave in

places

that are far from their

friends

and family, they have to deal with everything by themselves as they could not ask for help.

For instance

, when the furniture is broken, they will have to repair

by

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themselves.

This

allows them to become more independent and be able to take care of themselves. Another advantage is that they can make more new

friends

. When

people

live in

places

that are surrounded by

people

that are closed

with

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them, they will tend to be less willing to meet new

friends

.

However

, if they move away, they have to step out of their comfort zone and try to chat with their new neighbours.

As a result

, they will have the opportunity to form

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a friendship

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friendship

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with

people

of

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different areas.

On the other hand

, there are two cons.

Firstly

, it will make

people

feel lonely. When they

are moved

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away from

friends

and family, they have to live alone, which means they cannot hang out with

friends

and meet their families easily. In the long term, they may feel lonely and depressed, and

this

may lead to mental

problem

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.

Moreover

, it will make

people

feel

stressful

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. When an individual moves away from their close

friends

and family, they will have to deal with various tasks by themselves.

For example

, they have to find a new job after moving to

a new

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places

and it may not be easy.

Besides

, as they are living by themselves, they

also

have to consider

about

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the cost of living. They may have to reduce expenses.

Therefore

,

this

may make them feel anxious and

stressful

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. To conclude,

although

leaving their hometown may make

people

become more mature, they may become depressed and anxious in the long term, so

this

essay believes that the disadvantages of

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outweigh the advantages