Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Topic Vocabulary:

Environmental degradation
Noise pollution
Airborne emissions
Sustainable transportation
Aviation industry
Taxation measures
Economic ramifications
Regulatory framework
Technological advancements
Carbon footprint
Alternatives to flying
Government intervention
Green initiatives
Travel habits
Accessibility of travel
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Consumer behavior
Global tourism
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