Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world. What are the main factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?

Housing and accommodation were major problems around the world.Especially in poor countries. So I think it depends on the
people
and the government.If home prices are very high,
people
can't afford them.
forexcept
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except
rich
people
.
For example
, I want to take my country.In my country every year more and more are homeless and I  see it every day.But we can see the celebrities who can help them.
This
is a very good example for teenagers. Despite
this
, the problem with housing is being dismissed every day.Some are even in emergency conditions. They have survived the Soviet Union.And in many ,cases old elderly
people
live there. Since I have already said it depends on the government.If expensive building materials will be expensive, too, high prices.It's not a lot of
people
in Corman.The cheapest prices for emergency houses.
For example
the city of Almaty. There's money for everyone there.Because it is a megacity of Kazakhstan.All
people
work, the city is big and there are no problems with housing.
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