In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays in most
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countries, being the owner of a
house
is
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instead
of renting from someone else. In my point of view, owning a residence has both positive and negative on our lives. There are many several reasons that owning a
house
is important in many countries.
Firstly
, once we owned the
house
we don’t have to worry about the finances.
For instance
, it is true that most
of
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people are working for renting a
house
because 50 % of
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of our income goes for the rental price.
Secondly
, we can save
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money for our future since we don’t have to pay for
renting
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.
Finally
, if we have our own space, we can decorate our homes in our ways of styling.
Moreover
, many people are impressed
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being
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owner of the
house
.
On the other hand
,
being
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obsessed
in
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owning a
house
can be
negative
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impact on our lives. The thing is that the pressure of being a
house
is always in the mind so that we cannot enjoy our lives fully,
Also
we will be stressed and busy with full of work schedules in order to find money to buy a
house
.
For example
, we cannot attend
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meeting
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friends because of our daily schedules.
As a result
, we will be lost our younger days in
this
kind of stress. In conclusion, owning a
house
is important for some reasons but it is
also
important that we have to keep balance
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our everyday activities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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