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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my problem with the printer which I had bought before locking down for Covid. Because of Covid, I had to work at home, so I provided some equipment that I got from your store. The printer worked properly for one month, but
then
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, it makes an extra line
that is
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 not only very sharp but
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too
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 tick which makes some words no longer readable. I tried to fix it and changed one of its pieces. But the line still appears.
This
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 line causes some details to be covered and it makes the plan unclear. Since our
plan
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are
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 so
detail
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, we need to get
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error
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print
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. Can I return the printer and get the other model? Because I don’t like
this
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 model anymore Best regard Mahdi
sohtabi
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Sohrabi
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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