you work from home and you a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job write a letter to the shop that supplied the equipment to you.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you today because I am encountering some technical problem with your gadget.
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, the wire is poorly connected to my computer, and it continuously disconnects.
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, the sound quality of the handset is noxiously poor.
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, I cannot carry out my job properly as I cannot hear the customer well.
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, the wire problem causes a hindrance to my physical movement, which is deeply annoying and can, later on, cause some health problems.
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, I am suggesting that the shop should replace these headphones with one that has better sound quality as well as a good connecter and long wire. I am looking forward to your reply. You can always reach me via email, or simply call me on my phone number. Yours faithfully, Youssef Abo-Dahab
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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