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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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Nowadays, many schools and families are trying to teach
children
 about right and wrong
thing
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.
However
, different families have their own ways to teach their
children
, while some parents are having the
punishment
 when
the
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children
doing
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some
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bad things. In my perspective, I think that
punishment
are
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 one of the good factors to remind
children
 about the terrible things they did, but the parents should have a
limit
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punishment
 as well. So in the paragraph below I will show some sorts of
punishment
 that I think parents should be followed.
Firstly
,
quarantine
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 the
children
 in their room without any social network is one of the
idea
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 that I think
its
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is
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 the way to
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children
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children's
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behavior
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behaviour
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.
For example
,
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children
childrens
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children
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 are too addicted to
mobile
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a mobile
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 phone so if there are no network
children
 will have more time to concentrate
to
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others thing
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other things
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 and maybe they will change their thoughts.
Secondly
, use a little
of
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violent
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violence
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such
 as hitting because when
children
 did some things wrong
these
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this punishment
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punishment
 will make them fear and remember it,
then
 they will not do
this
 again
in
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the
second
 time.
For instance
,
mom
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the mom
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 was slapping her
child
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child's
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 hand because her boy getting home very late. In summary, I partly agree that having the
punishment
 can
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children
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children's
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habit
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habits
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 and
teaching
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teach
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children
about
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apply
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what should
do
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and shouldn’t do.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • punishment
  • positive reinforcement
  • consequences
  • time-outs
  • removal of privileges
  • open communication
  • clear expectations
  • consistency
  • fairness
  • disciplinary action
  • proportionate
  • moral values
  • internalization
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