Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous.

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It is commonly believed that
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human
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other planets and have not been
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discovered
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huge controversy about whether to make
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with them or not, some scientists
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that we should contact them while others take
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other intelligent
life
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is a better choice. Some scientists believe that human being should take the initiative attitude towards discovery and communicate new
life
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, which is not only benefits technology development but
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broaden eys-sight, and can make a plan for
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move to
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with
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suffers the
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effect and environment pollution.
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global warming became worsen and worsen, scientist
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to find a new planet which is near the
earth
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and with all fundamental living conditions for people, so that we can move to a new home in case
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can not provide enough circumstance for us.
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curiosity
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something undiscovered, which
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huge attention from our internal interest.
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outer space is full of
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and
risk
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at present moment, people can not undertake the
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overcome under
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situation.
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, we can not predict the disasters and can not offer help
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those countries which suffered
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, flood, etc
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in currently, let alone the disaster and dangerous items from
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not been developed yet. In my view, we should consistently update our technology and seek the intelligent
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reasons
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, but stop
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them for we can not undertake the consequence. At present moment, we should pay more attention
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the
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and the things
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nearby.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • investigate
  • interstellar
  • speculate
  • communication
  • primitive
  • potential
  • collaboration
  • unlock
  • unprecedented
  • advancement
  • caution
  • consequences
  • hostile
  • unknowingly
  • civilization
  • disrupt
  • evolution
  • preserve
  • ponder
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