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The graph covers the predicted number of members in
three
 gyms in New York from 2020 to 2024 respectively. In 2020,the figures of the Centre
Gym
 will be by far the highest
as
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close to 1200 per annum. The figure is triple of the Spike’s
gym
 and one and a half times of the Prentice Gymnasium.
However
, the trend had changed considerably in 2021; The membership of the Centre
Gym
 will be divided by
three
 times , and there may
also
 be
an
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 decrease in the figure of the Prentice Gymnasium while the ers of Spike’s
Gym
 may climb to about 600 per year. In 2022,2023 and 2024, all
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three
 gyms will have
a
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 obvious increase in the figures of their membership. The Spike’s
Gym
 will have a constant rise
about
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 200 members annually.
In contrast
, the other two gyms, the Prentice Gymnasium and the Centre
Gym
 may only have a slight increase in these
three
 years to about 900 and over 800 respectively.
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