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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days a
job
 is something
that is
 necessary for any
person
 around the world to earn a living for himself and his family. Some people argue that
job
satisfaction
 is important over
job
security
 because it will ensure mental
health
. While others argue that
job
security
 is more important than
job
satisfaction
 or ease because a permanent
job
 can assure you a salary at the end of each month.
This
 essay will discuss
both
 sides of the argument before reaching a logical opinion. On one hand,many people believe that
job
satisfaction
 is more important than
job
security
 as it will assure mental
health
.
For example
, in a recent report by the University of
Health
 and Science, it was stated that about 40% of the people who are happy with their jobs tend to have a healthier life than the ones who have a stressful work routine.
Hence
job
satisfaction
 is very important for a
person
's
health
. While
on the other hand
, the advocates of the idea that
job
security
 is more necessary than
job
satisfaction
 believe that it would make sure a steady stream of income. And because of
this
 thing a
person
 can make financial decisions very firmly as he will be sure about the source of income.
For example
, in Brazil, the government
job
 holders where the
job
security
 is confirmed, are more financially stable than the others.
Thus
job
security
 is something very essential for a
person
's financial stability.
However
, I believe that
both
job
satisfaction
 and
security
 are very important aspects of a happier lifestyle in terms of healthy and financial life. In conclusion, if a workplace is providing
both
 work comfort and
security
,
then
 it's no less than a blessing one can expect. As
both
 these things are enough to make a
person
's work-life much more interesting and enjoyable.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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