Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Discuss both views and give opinion.

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A discussion about the Ethnography parameters has always been permeative and immanent among intellectuals ,
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, museums and art galleries are responsible to promote the local tradition rather than other nations'
history
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. I am in complete accord with the former ideology and the reason for my opinion will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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, promoting the national culture in museums has great value.
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, my country is rich in
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(pharaohs, temples , pyramids , statues,...........)
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the new generations have a little information about their past .
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,the role of the Government is to encourage museum visiting by all the students with a reduced entrance fee,
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, our traditions ,skill and treasures will be known.
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, the collaboration between nations is beneficiary and introducing their
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and culture has a great impact ,
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, the cost may be will exhaust the government and cultural sectors.
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,
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idea can be applicable for international events like EXPO exhibitions , not only to increase tourism but
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with great value to the economy and unemployment rate. To summarize,both local and international
history
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have a great value, after a thorough analysis of
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subject .I believe to promote local
history
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among my country's people ,especially the young buds
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transferring to the international level if the budget will allow that .
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