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Coronavirus pandemic exposes social inequalities. Do you agree?

#coronavirus #pandemic #inequalities
The
coronavirus
 pandemic has surfaced social differences over the world.I completely agree with the above statement and going to elaborate
further
 on
this
 topic in the
next
 paragraphs as global
coronavirus
infection
 has made clear, how much gap exists between societies depending on their geographical location,resources available and commitment of local governments to their civilians. World-wide
infection
 of
coronavirus
 disturbed people all over the globe and coping with it was never an easy task .Most countries needed to go through lock-down for preventing the spread of
infection
 and save the
life
 of their citizens.During lock-down number of people have trouble getting their food while the other class spend money on entertainment.Workers use to work day to day remained jobless and their
life
 depended on government help and social support.wealthier nations came up with unemployment insurance plans to transfer money to their workforce while they remained at home due to lock-down.
On the other hand
 labourers in
third
 world countries got no help at all and went bankrupt. The poor class struggled for
life
 survival from
infection
 as well as economic crisis due to loss of income and work.Rich people were missing their social
life
,parties and travelling as a travel ban was in effect during the pandemic period.High-end category individuals were concerned about their luxuries while the low end was fighting for
life
 survival.One end of society was struggling for basic
life
 needs and another part was getting irritated due to home boundness where they can do nothing for pleasure. So,considering the above-mentioned facts it is obvious that
coronavirus
 global
infection
 made social inequalities more apparent than any time before.It showed the real face of social depth between its categories and their relations to each other during times of crisis.
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