Many people feel that media coverage has becoming increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

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Media
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is one of the most popular television channels
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used around the
world
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to seek,
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understand
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knowledge about the
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. Most feel
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coverage
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is
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increasingly
being
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today and I will give my reasoning and solution to fix
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essay.
Media
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is
most
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convenient way to access
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what is happening in the nation and around the
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. In recent times, due to
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use of
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the internet
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social
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such
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as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter are where we find the news instantly. These
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platform's
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media
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coverage
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is mostly biased without relevant
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this
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can be due to
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of
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on
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situation or just to increase the volume of viewers onto their
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by only seeking in a direction or it can
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be due to one’s personal interest.
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, during the local elections in any part of the
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media
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platform
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is been given
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sum amount by one of the local parties to give or provide biased
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about their ethics or work to
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the public
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this
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form has been seen quite seen on a very often basis due to corruption.
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,
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information
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can be subsidised by
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on any
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by
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out or discussing the content with
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people or can
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have an argument
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two groups on the given
platform
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. Another way to solve
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issue
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by researching the
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in depth
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way so only relevant facts can
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bespoke
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spoke
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spoken
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off
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. Government can
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impose laws in terms of
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on
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, so they think twice before speaking and spreading
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information
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. Whereas, it is us the viewers who
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to be smart and educate ourselves not being deceived by them and always finding and researching the actual content
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the topic. To sum
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up, biased
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on
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will continue to exist. It can be
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a few
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things where any channels do not have enough access to all the
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in
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an
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around the
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and
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it is the listeners or
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viewers'
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duty to gain knowledge in
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open minded
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so there
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less confusion among us.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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