Many people feel that media coverage has becoming increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

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Media

is one of the most popular television channels

that is

used around the

world

to seek,

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understand

and

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knowledge about the

world

. Most feel

media

coverage

increasigly

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increasingly

being

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today and I will give my reasoning and solution to fix

this

problem

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below

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essay.

Media

most

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convenient way to access

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what is happening in the nation and around the

world

. In recent times, due to

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the increasingly

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increasingly

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use of

internet

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the internet

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social

media

such

as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter are where we find the news instantly. These

platforms

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media

coverage

is mostly biased without relevant

information

this

can be due to

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information

going

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situation or just to increase the volume of viewers onto their

platform

by only seeking in a direction or it can

also

be due to one’s personal interest.

For instance

, during the local elections in any part of the

world

media

platform

is been given

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sum amount by one of the local parties to give or provide biased

information

about their ethics or work to

public

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the public

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this

form has been seen quite seen on a very often basis due to corruption.

Nevertheless

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information

can be subsidised by

media

on any

platform

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out or discussing the content with

open minded

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people or can

also

have an argument

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between

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two groups on the given

platform

. Another way to solve

this

issue

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by researching the

coverage

in depth

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way so only relevant facts can

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bespoke

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off

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. Government can

also

impose laws in terms of

coverage

media

, so they think twice before speaking and spreading

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information

. Whereas, it is us the viewers who

needs

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to be smart and educate ourselves not being deceived by them and always finding and researching the actual content

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the topic. To sum

this

up, biased

information

media

cover

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will continue to exist. It can be

few

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a few

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things where any channels do not have enough access to all the

information

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around the

world

and

also

it is the listeners or

viewers

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viewers'

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duty to gain knowledge in

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open minded

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so there

are

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less confusion among us.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Topic:Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health.

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