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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or working a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Different
people
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 have various motivations to learn a new
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. While some
people
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 are promoting the idea that it is only needed when ones want to live or visit another place, others consider learning a
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 far more important for other means. I am convinced that it is quite critical for
people
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 to know the
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 of a country they want to visit;
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, it is not the only important reason. Those who advocate learning
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 to immigrate or travel to other countries have valid points. They usually take the example of the most basic needs like buying groceries or finding an address which one faces in their lives routinely and are necessary for both tourists and immigrants to know about. As humans can not live without responding to their basic needs, knowing the
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 is vital.
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, almost all careers are involved
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communicating with co-workers and customers.
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, for a person to be able to work in a store, he is expected to be able to talk with customers to sell products.
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 that, the vital thing for getting recruited is to compete with other applicants during job interviews.
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, if a person can not speak
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the country's main
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, their chance to find a job will decrease significantly. Despite the above so-called reason, There are other reasons for learning a foreign
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.
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 of all,
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 has always been viewed as the main factor to bring
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 closer. Since the internet provides a platform to widen the circle of
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acquaintances
, knowing new languages results in having wider connections, which not only means more friends but
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 more customers.
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, even without going to other countries, to improve a local business
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 an international one knowing different languages is valuable. Added to
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 is the medical aspect where studies have shown learning new things is essential for mental health.
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, the best way for preventing
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 a new
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.
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,
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 can say there are more important rationales behind it. To sum up, one can say a person who goes or works in another country needs to learn their
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, I believe that it is beneficial even for the ones who do not want to immigrate.
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