Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, myriads of people are

traveling

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overseas for personal enjoyment. There is an opinion that the country can face drawbacks from the

tourists

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, I believe that visitors influence the countries they travel to positively because their arrival leads to improved economics and

infrastructure

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-of-all, the

traveled

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country benefits from foreigners’ financial

contribution

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Tourists

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frequently visit the most well-known sights, enjoy the most exotic dishes, and get gifts from the trip for their relatives and friends.

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, all of these expenses contribute to the country’s economical condition by not only raising salaries for the workers but

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providing new workplaces.

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, Korea’s citizens have experienced a seven

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rise in income as the

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tourists’

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tourists

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inflow has risen by 10%.

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, the country’s

infrastructure

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is constantly being developed to attract more

travelers

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travellers

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. There is no denial that

tourists

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often choose the

next

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destination according to the access

of

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sights including famous local restaurants, hotels, and available vacation spots.

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, the countries draw visitors by improving their

infrastructure

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, which is beneficial for the citizens’ quality of life as well. An example of Dubai is very relevant, because, in the

last

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decade, its’ number of skyscrapers and quality of lining has significantly improved. In conclusion,

travelers’

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travellers’

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inflow has numerous advantages for the

traveled

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travelled

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country. From my point of view, a growing number of

tourists

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will lead to the country’s overall improvement by influencing the economics and

infrastructure

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