Some people believe that social media sites, such as face book or twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The effects of social

media

on

youth

are a well-discussed topic nowadays. Some individuals think that has undesirable impacts on

relationships

.

On the other hand

, opponents believe that social

sites

are favourable and useful for youngsters. In my view,

shortages

are more than benefits and I will explain them. Seems,

Although

, social

media

sites

have achieved superb things recently, they have many

shortages

,especially among

youth

and citizens are concerned . One of the major

shortages

of these

sites

such

as Facebook and Twitter is mental illness. If youngers spent more time on these

sites

, they would become addicted. So, it leads to avoiding real

relationships

in society, sitting overtime in front of computers and focusing on unreal life.

Furthermore

, the other negative impact is that youngsters believe everything sees on the internet. It is clear there

are

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much

of

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wrong news and fake characters

in

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social

media

.

Consequently

,

youth

rely on that news and it is harmful

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them because youngers would compare famous people with their own. It leads to depression, stress and pressure on their shoulder and they would not able to form

relationships

in real society.

However

, there is no meaning that social

media

sites

have

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not

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benefit. These

sites

are gathering for each people types which are live any different parts of the world with various characteristics to transfer data to each other. So, it is really useful. The example can be seen as finding study groups or sports groups of the same ages. It is a beneficial easy way for them to find friends and make superb

relationships

.

For example

, Facebook has an option in which people can find their schools friends or old partners, honestly,

that is

great.

Moreover

, it is a wonderful source

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forgetting

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for getting

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a job or renting a house easily.

Furthermore

, in my eyes benefits are less than negative effects and

this

is a sensitive topic and needs more professional analysis. In conclusion, social

media

sites

have benefits and

shortages

for

youth

and their

relationships

so, it is advisable to control using of these

sites

for youngers and aware them about the facts about social

media

.