In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Many

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companies nowadays try to promote

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vehicle

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systems, which is considered a revolution in automotive.Even though

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is not popular yet because of the

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of technology nowadays, I optimistically think that people will use it in the future.From my perspective, the

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has both advantages and disadvantages,

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the benefits of the

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operation will outweigh the drawbacks in the future because it could reduce human error on the road. There are still many people who wish to use the

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, though they do not have any driving skills, making

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difficult to go anywhere else.

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, if they have a

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car, the passengers would just sit in the car and wait until the car goes to the destination.

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, computer operation would decrease human error, which is ready to make mistakes at any time.

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, I have seen many accidents in the news, especially the trucks because these types of vehicles require more driving skills than others because of many conditions

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as the

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's weight, and size.

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, there are some of the profits that society can obtain from

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vehicles.

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, there are huge drawbacks that potentially affect human life, which as accidents. Anything in the world is not perfect, so when an accident occurs it will be a huge loss for anyone.

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, if public transportation replaces all buses with a

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and anything bad happens on the road, it would be a disaster because of the capacity of the bus.

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is one of the disadvantages that

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will replace the present

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in one day and everyone can see that there are both good and bad sides.

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, the profits of

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vehicles will outweigh the disadvantages because I believe that every company in automotive will try to prevent the bad situation that might happen to users as much as possible, avoiding any harm to their business.

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task response

Ensure the introduction clearly states your opinion on whether the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

task response

Provide a stronger conclusion that summarizes the main points and reinforces your opinion on the topic.

coherence and cohesion

Use transitional phrases to improve the flow between paragraphs and make the essay easier to follow for the reader.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

330 words

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