In some cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem

In some
cities
and towns all over the world, the high volume of
traffic
is a
problem
. What are the causes of
this
and what actions can be taken to solve
this
problem
?
Traffic
congestion has been a major
problem
in many urban communities of the world. As
high
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number
of
traffic
tie-up is increasing on daily basis thereby causing
problem
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the problem
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which many
believes
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over
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overpopulation
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population
and bad
roads
with
inability
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the inability
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to read
traffic
signs to be the reasons for
this
.
However
,
reduction
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in
number
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a number
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of
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populace and construction of good
roads
with education on
usage
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the usage
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of
traffic
signs could help curb
this
challenge. The following paragraphs will expatiate more on my views.
To begin
with,
road block
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in many
cities
and towns is
as a result
of
large
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a large
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population
. Individuals from near and far chose a particular city as their place of abode thereby increasing its
population
count.
As a result
of
this
, there is road blockage during rush hours in those
cities
.
For instance
, the former capital territory of Nigeria, Lagos state is vastly populated due to its lucrative and affluence value,
therefore
leading to
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during a specific time frame
such
as in the morning and evening.
In addition
, bad
roads
has
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caused more harm than good.
This
has led to
death
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the death
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of so many citizens.
Also
,
nonchalant
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attitude of
masses
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the masses
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in the usage of
traffic
signs increases
grid lock
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in many
society
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.
Furthermore
, road blockage can be eradicated by
construction
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the construction
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of good
roads
and
educating
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the
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apply
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illiterate drivers
how
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on how
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to interpret the
traffic
lights. As
this
helps to reduce
delay
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delays
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in
traffic
and death witnessed
as a result
of it.
For example
,
traffic
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signaler or flag person should be placed in each
traffic
post , in order for them to assist in the movement and coordination of vehicles.
Subsequently
, people in authority shout perform census in order to reduce the
number
of immigrants in a city as
these
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helps to reduce
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overpopulation
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over
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overpopulation
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population
. In conclusion,
although
increased
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an increased
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number
of populaces and damaged reads has been sited to be the cause of
traffic
lock in many
cities
, construction of good
roads
and reducing
population
count will go a long way in assisting with the
problem
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