Some people say that now is a best time in the history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to living.

Few individuals believe that today is the best period for living as compared to previous years I agree with
this
statement
however
if I get the opportunity to Time Travel I would love to live between the time of 1970s to 1980s. Two comments with compared to the past, today life is very convenient because there are lots of facilities available nowadays
such
as a means of transport,better education system and medical treatments
people
live longer as compared to past with new drugs
additionally
average
people
are financially strong because almost everyone is educated and find jobs for living
people
are capable to fulfil their basic needs and dreams
also
in the previous year
people
only depend on agriculture while now there are many sources of income
However
, if I had the chance to select another era in the history to live in I would choose 1970
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to 1980 because at that time environment was very fresh and clean oxygen was present in large amounts because industries and vehicles were less
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that era. Individuals lived healthy life while present-day one-tenth person suffered from critical diseases
such
as asthma and skin allergies In conclusion,
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was fresh and clean in the past water now is the best period to survive because of the facilities and jobs present now
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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