Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

#mrs #barrett #woman #lives #town #someone #home #hours #summer #barrettes #work

Dear Mrs Barett, I am writing

this

to inform you that I am available to assist you in your household chores starting June 2022. As you have mentioned in the advertisement that you need someone to help you out in cooking, I am an expert cook in making continental as well as traditional cuisines, particularly, Pakistani dishes

such

as Karahi and Biryani. I am sure you would love it.

Moreover

, during my master's degree, I took cooking as a private course from Gotham Cooking Institute Lahore which is a famous institute that offers cookery classes in Pakistan. Since I am living as a bachelor in Jeddah and during my summer break, I would have plenty of leisure time.

Therefore

, I would like to have somebody to spend a good time with. As you know, people here usually speak Arabic, and it is quite a challenge to find someone who could speak English. So, I think we will enjoy our time.

Furthermore

, we might end up becoming good friends.

Lastly

, I need to tell you that I would be available 5 days a week, Monday to Friday because I play cricket with my friends on Saturday and Sunday. If you are okay with the aforementioned schedule, kindly reply as soon as possible so that I make my plans

accordingly

. Yours Sincerely, Kamal khan

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