The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient way of life for sake of future generations. Do you agree or this disagree with this statement?
These days, confronting
environment
Replace the word
environmental
issues
is a Change to a genitive case
individual's
individuals
moral Change the noun form
individual
responsibilities
in Fix the agreement mistake
responsibility
whole
world. There is a common belief that solving environmental problems is in charge of Change the article
the whole
current
Add an article
the current
generation
to spend their life to save it for new
Add an article
a new
the new
generation
. While,
many say that future Remove the comma
apply
generation
is responsible to protect it. Although
there are arguments on both sides, I strongly disagree that present
Correct article usage
the present
generation
sacrifice
their convenient life for sake of Change the verb form
sacrifices
new
Correct article usage
the new
generation
.
There are convincing arguments in favor
of solving environmental Change the spelling
favour
issues
by current
Add an article
the current
generation
. Firstly
, they can try to be more environmentally friendly. Individuals who are living in recent
era can Add an article
the recent
use
the
more renewable resources rather than non-renewable Correct article usage
apply
because
of saving Correct pronoun usage
ones because
this
energy for future
. Correct article usage
the future
In other words
, people
could replace eco-friendly vehicles with petrol-driven cars. Take the
electric vehicles as an example, cars will reduce to Correct article usage
apply
use
fossil
fuels so that future Change preposition
of fossil
generation
will apparently utilize Fix the agreement mistake
generations
it
as raw materials in Correct pronoun usage
them
the
manufacturing Correct article usage
apply
other
items like plastic. Change preposition
of other
As a result
, present
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the present
generation
would be effective to remedy the environmental issues
and protect it
with changing in their life way. Correct pronoun usage
them
Secondly
, present
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the present
generation
can use
less harmful gadget
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gadgets
to
Change preposition
for
environment
. If Add an article
the environment
people
use
less harmful items which are led to environmental degradation, it will solve some environmental issues
. For instance
, farmers in developed countries have been utilizing heavy machinery like tractors to cultivate, resulting in soil erosion and compacting. This
method could be changed in order to solve some environmental issues
.
However
, it is predicted that,
solving environmental problems by Remove the comma
apply
coming
Correct article usage
the coming
generation
will be done. first
and foremost, they will apparently present innovative and creative way
to confront Fix the agreement mistake
ways
the
environmental Correct article usage
apply
issues
. Simply put, they would present innovative approach
and invent cutting edge Fix the agreement mistake
approaches
gadget
to solve environmental Fix the agreement mistake
gadgets
issues
. For example
, next
people
would invent the innovative method which turn
water into oil containing Change the verb form
turns
less
harmful chemical Add an article
the less
a less
substance
. Fix the agreement mistake
substances
In addition
, raising next
generation
awareness. these people
can have
effective contribute to Unnecessary verb
apply
solve
environmental Change the verb form
solving
issues
,
if they educate correctly. Remove the comma
apply
For instance
, an
Correct article usage
apply
educationa
institutions in Canada, are takingCorrect your spelling
educational
education
course
aimed to raise young adults' awareness to prevent environmental degradation.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
courses
although
the current generation
plays a crucial role to solve environmental issues
, Add a hyphen
next-generation
next
Correct article usage
the next
generation
would contribute positively because of their new invention and awareness.Submitted by shokoohghavami on
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