Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

A nation is considered to be well-furnished when its metropolis

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structured as marvellous whereas others argue that serviceability is more crucial than beautification .In my opinion,I consider that effective measures are to be taken by

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for the well-being of society and its inhabitants as well.  

First

,It is a social obligation for all of us as human beings to make our living land more liveable.

Consequently

,government and municipal communities in

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every corner of the world continuously are planning on how much in different ways they can represent their municipality to other people of the world as

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one of the tourist attractions  to the visitors to both foreigners and local residents.

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,a beautiful city can help to earn a foreign revenue and local as well.Dubai

dysney

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Disney

world,

for example

,is one of the worldwide famous amusement parks

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the tourists nowadays only for the reason of its eye-catching

architectures

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which adds a greater source of earnings in the tourism field.  

Secondly

,It is believed,and I fully acknowledge that the more a developed capital is enriched in facilities towards its society,the more

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affluent it can be.

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, the basic needs-food,clothes,shelter education,transportation and medical-of the population of

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capital are not

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enough and

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the proper distribution unless it covers multifunctional capabilities.when a state is conscious more

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its sociological performance,it is automatically becoming inspired to construct the regions neat and clean and to look

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better.A developing country,

such

as Bangladesh,has undertaken various

wellbeing

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projects in different areas of the country

such

as

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widening program in Dhaka International Airport,

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metro-rail

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for the fastest movement throughout the

dhaka

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city and one of the larger bridges in Bangladesh- the Padma bridge.Some of these are under construction currently.Identifying the necessity of increasing the living standards of the Bangladeshi pupils,the republic of

this

country has taken

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decisions

atcorrect

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correct

at correct

time.

Therefore

,it is easily notable that prosperity depends largely on the features of a townhome. To sum up,the quality of being functional for metropolitan areas is

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preferable because it acts as the strongest

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for a kingdom.