some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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people
believe that learning
a foreign languages
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is more important for travelling and working in a foreign country. Some
people
say that these are not the only reason for learning a foreign
language
. In my opinion, foreign
language
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have pretty advantages. So, I totally agree with
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view. Because
,
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I think that foreign
language
give
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the more
opportunites
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opportunities
to get any information in
foreign
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language
such
as studying other countries culture and tradition to
people
.
In addition
,
according to
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the
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some research show that learning a foreign
language
is more helpful to our
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proper development
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for young kids.
Moreover
, learning a foreign
language
can make our life more fun and interesting. The reason why
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we
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can make
friend
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easily and communicate with multiple exciting
people
through the foreign
language
. As well as, learning a foreign
language
is
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chance to spend our time effectively and
enjoyable
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