Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The earth’s environment

are

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mostly ruined by

human’s

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action,

such

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extinct

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and endangered of many

species

of plants and animals, global warming, and oil spill. There

has

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been debates on what is the main environmental

problem

of our time. In

this

essay, I will explain two main environmental

problem

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and express my thoughts on which one of the two is more likely to be more problematic in the

future

. One of the main topic people have brought up when

environmental

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problem

is mentioned is the loss of particular

species

of plants and animal. Many

species

of organism has been extinct in our generation due to

human’s

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action including hunted to extinction and indirect pollution.

This

can cause many problems in the

future

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because some of the organisms that

was

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lost could be very useful to the environment or humans.

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, black panthers are one of the

animal

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animals

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that was hunted by humans to the point of

endangered

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. It was

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decades later, that the panther was needed in order for the food chain to function properly.

On the other hand

, global warming is another big topic to consider. Humans caused global warming

from

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burning fossil fuels, producing greenhouse gas, and much more.

This

could lead to a very serious

problem

in the near

future

starting with icebergs in

Arctic

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the Arctic

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being melted causing sea level water to rise. In conclusion, global warming and

loss

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the loss

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of many

species

of organisms are both hazardous

problem

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. In my opinion, I believe that

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global warming is more likely to be the main

problem

in the

future

,

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because the loss of

organism

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organisms

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will undoubtedly

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affect

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effect

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affect

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multiple

ecosystem

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ecosystems

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meanwhile global warming will

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affect

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effect

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the whole planet.