some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History.

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been often mooted by
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of parents and teachers . It is often believed that
subjects
which will give pupils practical knowledge should be taught to them .
Consequently
, some believe that
subjects
like History should be demoted and
topics
like
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science and technology should be promoted . In
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essay, we shall discuss both
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of view.
To begin
with , History is
study
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the study
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of our past
also
, it teaches us what mistakes were made in past and we shouldn’t make them in future .
Furthermore
, it not only tells about the glory of the past but
also
about the great personalities
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lived in previous centuries and fought for our present .
For instance
, if
topics
of history are not taught in schools
then
how we will the younger generation get to know about the persona of The great Shivaji and the lion king Maharana Pratap , who fought for our independence against the cruel Mughals .
On the other hand
,
topics
like Science and Technology should not be ignored . They give practical and
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knowledge for our life , which will be really used to tackle difficult situations in life .
For example
, if
topics
like computers which
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subpart
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of technology are not taught in schools
then
how will they be able to live modern world .
Moreover
, these
subjects
make children aware
about
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there environment in which
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living
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. To conclude , both the
subjects
are important for a student and none can be left . In my opinion , schools should make
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where there should be an amalgamation of both for
students
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overall development .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
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  • significance
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  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
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  • diversity
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