some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History.
Subjects
studied by students in school has
been often mooted by Correct subject-verb agreement
have
lot
of parents and teachers . It is often believed that Change the article
a lot
subjects
which will give pupils practical knowledge should be taught to them . Consequently
, some believe that subjects
like History should be demoted and topics
like the
science and technology should be promoted . In Correct article usage
apply
this
essay, we shall discuss both point
of view.
Change to a plural noun
points
To begin
with , History is study
of our past Add an article
the study
a study
also
, it teaches us what mistakes were made in past and we shouldn’t make them in future . Furthermore
, it not only tells about the glory of the past but also
about the great personalities which
lived in previous centuries and fought for our present . Correct pronoun usage
who
For instance
, if topics
of history are not taught in schools then
how we will the younger generation get to know about the persona of The great Shivaji and the lion king Maharana Pratap , who fought for our independence against the cruel Mughals .
On the other hand
, topics
like Science and Technology should not be ignored . They give practical and hands on
knowledge for our life , which will be really used to tackle difficult situations in life .Add a hyphen
hands-on
For example
, if topics
like computers which is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
subpart
of technology are not taught in schools Add an article
a subpart
the subpart
then
how will they be able to live modern world . Moreover
, these subjects
make children aware about
there environment in which Change preposition
of
there
Correct your spelling
they're
living
.
To conclude , both the Wrong verb form
live
subjects
are important for a student and none can be left . In my opinion , schools should make an arrangements
where there should be an amalgamation of both for Correct the article-noun agreement
arrangements
an arrangement
students
overall development .Change noun form
students'
student's
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