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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
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Nowadays, landfills are filling and they are more toxic compared to the
last
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 decades. It is true that
people
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 produce more rubbish and I believe that are two chief reasons , using excessive packing
products
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 and throwing away the plastic bags we use for shopping. In my opinion, the government can deal with these problems by applying stringent rules and
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 enhancing the awareness of
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 .
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 of all, it should be mentioned that a significant part of rubbish which is produced , comprises the packing from things we buy
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 as proceed foods. These days , most companies tend to use the technology and special machines to pack their
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 , they believe that it makes their product more attractive
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people
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 are more eager to buy
products
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 in special package apart from that it is more convenient to transport or storage
products
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 which are in the package or can.
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, the devastating impact of plastic bags that we throw away can not be ignored .we should know that the cheapest plastics need valuable sources and energy to be produced.
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, plastics are a great source of environmental pollution and are difficult to
dispose
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. In order to solve these problems government should take drastic action .
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, they apply strict rules
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 as the tax on packing
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 or enhancing awareness of
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 by holding educational programs. To conclude ,
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people
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 produce a lot of garbage compared to
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 decades , it can be reduced by increasing the awareness of
people
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 and
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 applying strict rules by the government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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