Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays,
people
tend to show their reputation in front of others by spending a lot of money, Use synonyms
such
as doing massive birthday parties or making expensive weddings with Linking Words
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an unbelievable
amount
of cash. I completely disagree Fix the agreement mistake
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with
this
opinion, even though some Linking Words
people
might have different views. Use synonyms
However
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essay will seek to examine the complex issue.
On the one hand, I would like to point out that there are various to consider making large weddings. Before all else, Linking Words
people
are doing these extreme weddings to show off their wealth and they believe it is a way of announcing their status. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it is Linking Words
also
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girls
to be married in a huge palace-like wedding hall. By doing Change to a singular noun
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, they can feel self-assured and be impressed by relatives and intimates.
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On the other hand
, I would like to express an equal view that there are several arguments for using Linking Words
enormous
amount of money on a wedding. Correct article usage
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First
of all, some Linking Words
people
dispute their partners will be miserable if their financial background is not strong enough to do Use synonyms
a
extensive wedding. They can even get ashamed since they cannot Change the article
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fullfill
their loved ones' wishes. Correct your spelling
fulfil
Besides
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instead
of wasting your money by doing unnecessary special Linking Words
ceremony
, it would be better if you save it for your future planFix the agreement mistake
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although
there are some arguments and different opinions, I passionately believe that it brings more negative impacts rather than positive Linking Words
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.Correct your spelling
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