Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays,
people
tend to show their reputation in front of others by spending a lot of money, such
as doing massive birthday parties or making expensive weddings with unbelievable
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an unbelievable
amount
of cash. I completely disagree Fix the agreement mistake
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with
this
opinion, even though some people
might have different views. However
, there are both positive and negative aspects to this
opinion. This
essay will seek to examine the complex issue.
On the one hand, I would like to point out that there are various to consider making large weddings. Before all else, people
are doing these extreme weddings to show off their wealth and they believe it is a way of announcing their status. Moreover
, it is also
a dream of every girls
to be married in a huge palace-like wedding hall. By doing Change to a singular noun
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this
, they can feel self-assured and be impressed by relatives and intimates.
On the other hand
, I would like to express an equal view that there are several arguments for using enormous
amount of money on a wedding. Correct article usage
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First
of all, some people
dispute their partners will be miserable if their financial background is not strong enough to do a
extensive wedding. They can even get ashamed since they cannot Change the article
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fullfill
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Besides
, instead
of wasting your money by doing unnecessary special ceremony
, it would be better if you save it for your future planFix the agreement mistake
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,
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starting
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although
there are some arguments and different opinions, I passionately believe that it brings more negative impacts rather than positive affects
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effects
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