You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter .Say which points in the article you agree with .Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers .Offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

to express my disagreement with your views in the article about the town

centres

in my country, which was published in Sunday Times on 25th April

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2022. In your article, you mentioned that the

city

centres

in Pakistan are extremely identical and have nothing different to offer.

Although

you are right about the generalization of food, sitting areas and the rush.

However

, if we dig deep there are stark contrasts in all the town

centres

. To illustrate my point, Islamabad downtown is the hub of all traditional cuisines from different provinces which is not available in Lahore or Karachi

centres

Moreover

, in the middle, there are huge empty spaces for families to sit and enjoy their time, and ample parking lots are available, so it does not matter how many people come to the

city

centre.

Also

, all the big brands have their outlets in Islamabad

city

centre.

Lastly

, I would like to invite you to my

city

in the summer. I hope you would enjoy your visit to our downtown, and we could

also

discover some new exhilarating places around the municipality. Kindly inform me about your availability so that I plan the schedule

accordingly

. Thanking in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Kamal Khan

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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209 words

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