You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter .Say which points in the article you agree with .Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers .Offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
to express my disagreement with your views in the article about the town
centres
in my country, which was published in Sunday Times on 25th April
,
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2022. In your article, you mentioned that the
city
centres
in Pakistan are extremely identical and have nothing different to offer.
Although
you are right about the generalization of food, sitting areas and the rush.
However
, if we dig deep there are stark contrasts in all the town
centres
. To illustrate my point, Islamabad downtown is the hub of all traditional cuisines from different provinces which is not available in Lahore or Karachi
centres
.
Moreover
, in the middle, there are huge empty spaces for families to sit and enjoy their time, and ample parking lots are available, so it does not matter how many people come to the
city
centre.
Also
, all the big brands have their outlets in Islamabad
city
centre.
Lastly
, I would like to invite you to my
city
in the summer. I hope you would enjoy your visit to our downtown, and we could
also
discover some new exhilarating places around the municipality. Kindly inform me about your availability so that I plan the schedule
accordingly
. Thanking in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Kamal Khan
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