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Some think Government spending on Infrastructure (Transport, Housing etc) is considered the most important for a nation. While others believe that Education, Health and HR values to be more important areas for government expenditure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is the responsibility of the
government
 to ensure basic infrastructures are provided for its citizens and categorizing whether
transportation
, housing,
education
,
health
 and HR Values should take priority should ultimately be based on certain key factors
such
 as revenue, proper budgetary allocation, and key economic drivers.   Some people are of the opinion that the
government
 should spend more revenue on sectors like transport, housing etc. reason being that developing these sectors would create huge economic value to the country at large.  
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 of goods and services which is the sole driver of any economy is largely dependent on a good
transportation
 system.  It is
therefore
 imperative that any responsible
government
, will ensure a good
transportation
 system takes priority as failure to do so will eventually
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slow down
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 the economic growth rate.
Likewise
, failure to provide housing at a low-cost rate will increase crime and unrest which would greatly affect the economy.  
On the other hand
, some people are of the view that
education
,
health
 and HR values are more important areas that require development. A
government
 that invests greatly
on
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education
,
health
 and HP values, tends to produce a viable platform for innovation and science to thrive.
Education
, as we all know, is the bedrock for development and wealth creation.
In addition
,
provision
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 of good
health
 services reduces
mortality
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the mortality
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 rate.    In conclusion, I am of the opinion having critically weighed both views, that for any
government
 to experience any significant growth in the economy, deploying huge revenue allocation to the development of the
transportation
 and housing systems should be of top priority.
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